不文明行为 Immoral Behavior in Public

范文三篇，希望您写出好作文。

第一篇范文：

To witness ①immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.

①Immoral behaviors in public ②initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ③sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people's rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.

The reform of① this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ②implementation and ③cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.

We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone ①shares the huge responsibility of ②demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.

点评：

◇第一段思路点评：

作文地带要求第一点，相关经历

◇语言点提示：

① immoral behavior in public：直接点题

◇第二段思路点评：

不文明行为的影响

◇语言点提示：

① immoral behavior in public：重复名词词组，与第一段衔接

② initiate：意思是“产生，发动”

③sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感”

◇第三段思路点评：

如何改善这些现象

◇语言点提示：

① this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，与上文衔接，且避免重复

②implementation：意为“执行，实施”

③cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率”

④ common good：意为“公益”

◇第四段思路点评：

作文地带总结

◇语言点提示：

①share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任”

②demonstrate：意为“展现”

liuxuepaper Editor's Note：

It have been discussed for a long time that how to deal with the uncivilized behaviors during the travel, such as write on the place of historic interests, or claim to old trees. This kind of things happened in China more often than any other countries. What can we do to prevent those actions?

Though we have advocate education of the tourists for years, the situation was not better than be imagined. In my opinion, we still have to encourage the education of our tourists, but with some change. For example, we should not only disseminate “Don’t Do Sth.”, but also with the reason and an explanation that it is not cool to sign names or words everywhere, in the contrary, we have to ashamed of that. Make a comparison between foreigners and us can also increase our consciousness.