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2009年6月四级英语作文预测及范文(四)

时间:2010-08-18来源:作文地带栏目:英语四级作文作者:作文地带 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)父母都会望子成龙,但是父母的期望有时候会与他们

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1)父母都会望子成龙,但是父母的期望有时候会与他们孩子的理想发生矛盾
  2)分析这种矛盾产生的原因  
  3)应该如何解决这一矛盾
  Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals _______________________________________________________________________________
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  行文思路
  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题,提纲第2点要求分析这一问题产生的原因,提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述父母的期望和孩子的理想之间的矛盾;分析这种矛盾产生的主要原因;说明解决这一矛盾的办法。
  高分范文
  Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals
  All parents hope their children will have a bright future. However, parents’ expectations for their children are not always [1]in accordance with their children’s personal ideals, [2]and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other. This is often a main cause for quarrels and gaps between parents and children. [3]But what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals?
  [3]The following three factors contribute to the conflict. [4]First of all, in this fast-changing society, parents and children have too many differences in mind. [4]Secondly, traditional patriarchy is still influencing Chinese parents in modern society. They are used to making decisions for their children. [4]Third, nowadays young people have strong independence, [5]who want to plan their own future and control their own destiny. [4]Thus the conflict between parents and children inevitably appear.
  [6]In order to solve the conflict, both parents and children should pay their efforts. [4]For one thing, parents should give their children rights to make their own decisions. They may help their children make choices [7]instead of replacing them to make choices. [4]For another, children should learn to respect their parents’ advices [8]since parents tend to have more life experience. [4]Besides, to communicate with each other actively is necessary to their understanding each other. As long as both parents and children learn to think [9]from the other side’s point of view, the conflicts between them can be avoided.
  【亮点点评】
  [1]“和…一致”。
  [2]表示递进。
  [3]通过转折和设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。
  [4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
  [5]who引导非限制性定语从句。
  [6]“为了”,表示目的,常用于句首。
  [7]“代替,而不是”。
  [8]since引导原因状语从句,表示既定的原因,常译为“既然”。
  [9]“从对方的角度”。
  佳句临摩
  1.佳句:Parents’ expectations for their children are not always in accordance with their children’s personal ideals, and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other. 英语作文
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