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2009年6月四级英语作文预测及范文(七)

时间:2010-08-18来源:英语四级作文栏目:英语四级作文作者:英语作文 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动
  2)这些活动给大学带来了哪些好处
  3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么
  Social Practice of College Students 
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  行文思路
  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处,提纲第3点要求指出注意事项,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:概述大学社会实践活动及其主要内容;分析社会实践活动给大学带来的好处;指出大学参加社会实践应该注意些什么。
  高分范文
  Social Practice of College Students
  Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s college education.
  [2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice. [4]Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.
  [7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship between social practice and study.
  【亮点点评】
  [1]平行结构。alike意为“类似的”,作后置定语。
  [2]“毫无疑问”,副词使用恰当。
  [3]“从…中受益很多”。
  [4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
  [5]“把知识运用到解决实际问题中”。
  [6]“加强社会责任感”。
  [7]用于得出结论。considering用作介词,意为“考虑到,鉴于”。
  [8]“平衡…之间的关系”。
  佳句临摩
  1.佳句:More and more students choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other activities alike.
  临摩:参加社交活动、结识新人和结交新朋友是新生融入大学生活的有效办法。
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  2.佳句:Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice. 英语作文
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