2010年6月四级英语作文预测及范文(2)

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　　[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。
　　[2]限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。
　　[3]that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。
　　[4]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。
　　[5]强调句型，此处是强调主语。
　　[6]which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。
　　[7]用于引出“我”的观点。
　　[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。
　　[9]since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。
　　[10]“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。
　　佳句临摩
　　1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
　　临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。
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　　2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.
　　临摩： 在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。
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　　3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.
　　临摩：我认为，对于我们来说，更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。
　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌
　　2)产生这种现象的原因是什么
　　3)你如何看待这一现象
　　Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
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　　行文思路
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。
　　高分范文
　　Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
　　Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.
　　[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.
　　[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.英语作文
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