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英语四级作文范例讲解(3)

时间:2010-08-19来源:作文地带栏目:英语四级作文作者:英语四级作文 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
On my personal level, the United Nation must take a leading role to medicate the conflicts of the world. And dear sir, as a peacemaker, you should be respected by a multitude of people. It is beyond

   On my personal level, the United Nation must take a leading role to medicate the conflicts of the world. And dear sir, as a peacemaker, you should be respected by a multitude of people. It is beyond doubt that the period of war is coming to an end and a whole new era of lasting peace will turn up. I am fully convinced that you can evoke support of all the countries. I am hoping that the peace of world will come true early.

  Respectfully yours,

  ZWP

  错误:

  1.to expand on my personal opinion / to express my opinion

  2.started by Bush administration. / launched by the Bush Administration

  3.If this war enlarges, / If this war escalates,

  4.setting armies to Iraqi / sending troops to Iraq.

  5.must take a leading role to medicate / must take a leading role in mediating

  Blonde:

  November 8,2004

  Dear Kofi Annan,

   As everyone knows,It is vitally important for people to maintain world's peace and maintain peaceful relations is duty by The United Nations .

   However,most country at war and the people at deep fire and water now. such as Iraq war at current ,whenever i am think this,my heart is very ache .I am worry about this people.

   So ,I think it necessary to do maintain peaceful relations .

   At that time, I am ask you to rescue that people .so that this people are gain freedom. and I hope maintain peaceful relations by The United Nations.

   Yours faithfully,

  blonde

  错误:

  1.Dear Kofi Annan / Dear Mr. Kofi Annan

  2.It is vitally important for people to maintain world's peace and maintain peaceful relations is duty by The United Nations / it is vitally important for people to maintain the world peace, and the maintenance of it is a duty of the UN.

  3.most country at war and the people at deep fire and water now. such as Iraq war at current / most countries are at war and their people live in hot water, such as the current Iraq War.

  4.my heart is very ache / my heart aches

  5.I think it necessary to do maintain peaceful relations ./ I deem it necessary to maintain ….

  6.I am ask you to / I am asking you

  7.so that people are gain freedom / so that people will gain freedom

  8.I hope maintain peaceful relations by The United Nations. / I hope that the UN will contribute more to the maintenance of ….

  您的作文几乎每句话都有错误,考试时候为2分档次作文。加倍努力啊!!!

  holier-YAN:

  我把作文就贴在这了,望丁sir能批下,打个分(我是考六级的)

  Dear Annan

  Thanks for reading my letter. As we all know, the peace of the world has risen many people’s focus on it. I also have my own idea on it.

  Nowadays, a variety of conflicts happen every day all over the world and many people sacrifized BECause of that. We know wars bring the people poverty and disaster. Because of the war many pelple lost their relatives, many children can’t go to the school and haven’t enough food to eat. The present condition of the peace of the world couldn’t satisfied us. We hope the conflicts can be minimized. We appeal that all of the countries could stop these evil behavious.英语作文
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