“双减(Double Reduction Policy)” 背景下的第一个暑假即将来临，为了让学弟学妹们度过一个有意义的暑假，学校开展了面向九年级学生的征文活动。请你根据所给信息并结合自身想法写一篇短文，至少提出三条建议并说明理由

写作要点：

1、建议      

2、原因     

3、提出希望

提示词：with the start of …；help …with housework；show your love to ...；doing voluntary work；help pupils with schoolwork；teach the old how to get a health code（码）

注意：

(1)短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；

(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

(3)词数80—100字；标题已给出，不计入总词数。

A Meaningful Summer Vacation

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A Meaningful Summer Vacation

With the start of Double Reduction Policy, here are my suggestions for you to have a meaningful summer vacation.

Firstly, you could help with housework. It’s a good way to show your love to parents. Secondly, you may volunteer to visit an old people’s home. I think the old people will be really happy if you spend time together with them. What’s more, you can also take up some hobbies. For example, you can have guitar lessons if you like music.

In a word, let’s make good use of the summer vacation.

总体分析：①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

写作步骤：第一步，引出本文主题，介绍有关度过一个有意义暑假的建议；第二步，提出合理的建议。

亮点词句

亮点词汇：①help with帮忙做；②spend time with sb与某人共度时光；③take up开始从事。

高分句型：①here are my suggestions for you to have a meaningful summer vacation.（倒装句）；

②It’s a good way to show your love to parents.（动词不定式作主语）。

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