主题明确、用词基本上恰当，且各有自己的独特风格，写得相当
     不错。当然其中仍不泛存在一些语法错误，这是小学生在起步学
     作文中所难免的，我们仍可以从其中得到很大的启发和帮助。)
                            Bill   and   His   New   Friend
                                                              一师附小 五年级 李思卿
       The sun is shinning. The birds are singing. What a nice
   day! Bill is walking in the forest. Suddenly, he sees a dog.
  The dog is lovely, but it looks very tired. “Maybe it's ill.”
  Bill thinks. “Is there anyone?” Bill shouts, “Whose dog is
  it?” No one answers him. “I must help the dog to find its
  owner.” Bill takes the dog to his home.
        The next day, Bill sticks some paper on the walls of the
  city. He writes on the paper: “I found a dog, it's brown. It
  looks ill. If you are its owner, please call me. My telephone
  number is 56430768. Thanks!”
        After many days, Bill still can't find the dog's owner.
  Bill makes a small house for the dog, and feeds bones to it
  every day. The dog is not often play together. Bill gives the
  dog a name -- Little Bill. Little Bill jumps to Bill, and shouts,
  “Woof! Woof!” Bill smiles. What a wonderful time they

                                                        上海世界外国语小学 夏宇宸
        One day, Bill was walking on the street. Then he saw a
  black and white dog sleeping in the bushes, it looked well
  fed, so Bill thought, “Some one must lost this dog, I have
  to help the dog to find his owner.”
        Bill took the dog home and printed out paper that says,
“Found dog, black and white.” Then he went out to put the
  papers over the neighbors and bought a bag of bones on
  the way back home.
        Soon Bill and the dog became good friends. They were ()