争先创优实践活动促进思想进步

例题:你班进行了一次综合实践活动.通过活动,同学们收获很大,尤其是李华同学进步最快.请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文.词数80个左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数.

过去的表现

经常与别人吵架
乱扔垃圾
沉溺于电脑游戏

现在的表现
与别人相处融洽
爱护环境
积极参加各种活动

作文地带提示:参考作文对比,注意重点突出.

一类优秀作文：

We are very glad that Li hua has made great progress. Before the activity, he often quarreled with other students, and never said sorry to others. He always threw trash in the classroom. Sometimes, he played computer games for a very long time. But now, he can make good friends with others. Also, he is very active in taking part in a lot of activities, such as playing basketball, visiting the museums, go swimming... We all like him very much.
We are very glad that Li Hua has made great progress. But he used to be impolite and even often quarreled with others. He threw litter about and made our classroom dirty. After class, he usually lost himself in playing computer games. After this activity, Li Hua has changed a lot. He gets on well with others and is ready to help them. He also takes good care of the environment. He takes an active part in all kinds of activities, too. We are all glad of his progress.