初中二年级 伍佰

I have a good mother.Her name is Yu Bihua.

She has short and black hair.Her eyes are big,round and black.Her mouth is small,and she likes talking so much.She is not so tall.She often wears a brown coat,black trousers and black shoes.She is 37years old,but she looks young.

My mother works in a hospital and she is a nurse.She is very busy.Every morning,she gets up early.Then she goes to work on foot.Her work begins at 7:30.She has lunch at 12:30.After lunch,she has a short rest and then goes to work again.At 6:00 p.m. She comes back home.In the evening ,she often watches TV,then goes to bed.

My mother is an ordinary,hard-working woman,but I'm proud of her.

【作文地带点评】本文作者通过对妈妈的外貌及日常生活、工作情况的描写，展现了一位普通又勤劳的妈妈形象，全文构思巧妙，文笔通顺。