This is a street in a town.There are some buildings on each side of the street.It is early in the morning.It's a rush hour.People are going to work and the children are going to school.There is much traffic.How busy the street is !

Look!A few children are coming from one side of the street to the other.They are goning to school.A policeman is standing in the middle of the street .He is watching the traffic.He wants the children to get across the street safely.

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