我们的摄影俱乐部即将举办国际中学生摄影展。主题是环境保护。展览从6月15日开始,持续三周。任何感兴趣的学生都欢迎参加。我知道你拍的照片很好,你一直想为环保做点什么。我记得上次你到我们学校时,给我看了那些照片。这绝对是一个让更多人看到它们的好机会。如果你想加入,你可以把你的照片发到tougao@liuxuepaper.com。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Peter,
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.(高分句型一)The theme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.(高分句型二)I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.I remember you showed me some photos on that theme last time you visited our school.(高分句型三)This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join,you can send your photos to tougao@liuxuepaper.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展.请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品,写作时注意以下几点:
1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:展览主题:环境保护;展览时间:6月15日开始,持续三周;投稿邮箱:tougao@liuxuepaper.com
2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.
3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:environmental protection环境保护;take pictures拍照;hear from收到…的信息;
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.(高分句型一)
Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.(高分句型二)
I remember you showed me some photos on that theme last time you visited our school.(高分句型三)
阅读障碍词汇,让你的文意理解无偏差:
calculate - 计算,核算
trend - 倾向,趋势
phenomenon - 现象
expose - 揭露,揭发;(照片)曝光
sensitive - 敏感的,感觉敏锐的;神经过敏的
insure - 给……投保
deliberately - 故意地,蓄意地,存心地
racial - 种族的
ridiculous - 荒谬的,愚蠢的
offend - 冒犯;触犯;使不愉快
shallow - 浅的;浅薄的
shrink - 变小,收缩
tide - 潮汐,潮流
innocent - 清白的;无辜的;无罪的;天真的;幼稚的
affection - 喜爱;钟爱
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