假如你是李华，你的外国笔友 Chris经常参与志愿服务，他给你发来邮件，询问你参加志愿服务的情况。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你参加过的一次志愿者活动，并谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：

children, bring, sing, join, wonderful

提示问题：

1. What volunteer work did you do?

2. How did you feel?

Dear Chris,

I’m glad to tell you about the volunteer work I did. __________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

参考作文地带整理范文：

Dear Chris,

I’m glad to tell you about the volunteer work I did. Last summer, I got an opportunity to volunteer at a Children’s Home in the community. My main duty was to take care of children aged five to seven years old. They were very friendly. They showed me big smiles when they saw a bag of gifts I brought for them. I did lots of things with them. I read stories, sang songs, and taught them something I was good at. It was a wonderful day. I was happy to be able to do something for little kids.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。

③提示：文章为第一人称，向别人介绍自己的志愿服务经历和感受。问题回答完整，提示词运用在文章中去，适当增加细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出地点在哪里做的志愿服务；

第二步，具体介绍自己做了哪些事情；

第三步，谈谈自己对于这次志愿服务活动的感受。

[亮点词汇]

① take care of照顾

② was good at擅长

③ was happy to高兴做某事

④ be able to能、会

⑤ opportunity机会

[高分句型]

① They showed me big smiles when they saw a bag of gifts I brought for them.（时间状语从句）

② I read stories, sang songs, and taught them something I was good at.（限制性定语从句）

③ My main duty was to take care of children aged five to seven years old.（动词不定式作表语）

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