I love my school

My school is in the east of zouping.There are some modern buildings in my school.It was built in 2006.There are a lot of trees and flowers around it.

The school looks like a big garden.More than 2000 students are studying in my school and about 150 teachers are working for us students here.

The teachers are very strict with us in our lessons.They work hard and often discuss how to teach the lessons together.

They all do well in teaching and they are very good with us.Also they are very friendly to us.

We often talk with each other about something that interest us together.Besides,we often do sports together on the ground.We all know it’s very important for us to keep fit.

I love my school a lot.

参考例句(文)
1.We often talk with each other about something that interest us together.
2.Our teachers are very strict with us in our lessons.
3.They all do well in teaching and they are very good with us.

参考作文地带整理点评：

作者描述自己的学校用了一些很好的词组。如：be strict with sb in sth在某一方面对某人要求严格，talk with sb about sth和某人讨论某事，等等。在写作的过程中语法正确，语句通顺，句意连贯。

给分理由：

在写作的过程中，没有出现语法错误，而且在用词方面又多变，理应给满分，不过还是扣3分，希望今后写出更好的文章。