大学生买房子的英语作文：College Students Buying Houses

　　1． 最近有不少在校大学生（或在父母帮助下）买了房子

　　2． 你如何看待这种现象？

　　【参考作文地带整理范文】

　　Recently, some “childish faces” appear in the real estate market, and to be property owners has gained popularity among college students. What comes along with this phenomenon is the contradiction: even if they thought it’s improper to use parents’ money, they still let their parents pay for their houses.

　　The following three factors can account for this trend: First and foremost, more and more local and foreign investors flood into the housing market, pushing the already soaring price to an even higher level. Furthermore, houses undertake the roles of value retaining and increment of assets, and help to be against inflation. Last but by no means the least, in many cases Chinese people often can’t get the sense of security completely until they have owned their own houses—they will save every penny to fulfill this lifelong dream.

　　Fortunately, government has issued policies to inhibit house prices. I personally believe that an increasing number of people can change their traditional mode of thinking, and improve their living quality and thus live a better life.

　　【点评】

　　本题谈论的是一种社会现象。文章第一段指出现象---房地产市场的准业主们中有越来越多的稚气面孔，学业未竟但悄然储房的“校园业主”大有人在，由此滋生一种奇怪的现象：一方面大家都意识到了不应该用父母的钱买房，而另一方面仍然在动用父母的钱，是什么催生了这种矛盾呢？

文章第二段作者结合自己的观点分析产生这一现象的三大原因： 首先国内外投资人蜂拥入市，将居高的房价进一步推高；其次房产承担着资产保值，增值的角色；最后中国人 “没有家就没有安全感”的传统观念挥之不去，所以省吃俭用也要买房。最后一段指出政府已经出台政策抑制房价，相信越来越多的人会改变传统观念，从而改善居住环境，提高生活品质。

文章第一段中comes along with表示“伴随着”。

第二段中列举三个原因，分别用First and foremost表示“首先”，Furthermore表示“其次”，Last but by no means the least表示“最后但并非最不重要”，短语value retaining and increment of assets表示“资产保值，增值”。

第三段中inhibit表示“抑制”，change their traditional mode of thinking表示“改变传统思维模式”。