题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。
       香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。

参考词汇：东方明珠  the Pearl of the East，          
                  鸦片战争 the Opium War

作文地带写作纲领（先考虑好主要的句子）：
香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。
1.香港的地理位置、面积和人口。
2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。
3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。
4、其前景会更美好。
1.Hong Kong is in the southeast of China.  Her area  is 1,045k㎡. Her population is more than 6 million.
2.She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War by the then government.
3.In 1997, she returned to motherland.
4.  Her future is very beautiful.

然后将这些句子合理的组合起来：

香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。
Hong Kong is in the southeast of China.Her area is 1,045k㎡. Her population is more than 6 million. She is known as“the Pearl of the East”.
She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.
In 1997, she returned to motherland. Her future is very beautiful.

检查润色：

用词灵活，句型多变，不要逐句翻译
Hong Kong is in the southeast of China.
Her area  is 1,045k㎡. Her population is more than 6 million. She is known as  “the Pearl of the East”.
Hong Kong whose area is 1,045k㎡ lies in the southeast of China with a population of more than 6 million.
She is well-known as“the Pearl of the East”.
适当增加细节（留意题目要求）
原文：She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. 
改写后：In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot .

原文：In 1997, she returned to motherland. Her future is very beautiful.
 改写后： After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united  more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.

改写后的全文：
      Hong Kong whose area is 1,045k㎡ lies in the southeast of China with a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.
      In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot .
      After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united  more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.

作文地带总结影响英语书面表达得分的几个因素：

1.是否灵活运用各种句型
2.是否使用高级词汇
3.结构是否清晰，行文是否连贯流畅
4.语篇信息是否完整, 有无多余
5 .卷面整洁,书写工整

歌颂母亲的诗歌：

"M" is for the million things she gave me,
 "O" means only that she's growing old,
 "T" is for the tears she shed to save me,
 "H" is for her heart of purest gold,
 "E" is for her eyes, with love-light shining,
 "R" means right, and right she'll always be,
 Put them all together, they spell "MOTHER",
 A word that means the world to me.
                        --Howard Johnson

 “母亲”的含义

  "M"代表她所给予我的无数，
   "O"的意思是她在日渐老去，
   "T"是她为抚育我洒下的泪，
   "H"指她有像黄金一样的心灵，
   "E"就是她的眼睛，里面洋溢着爱的光芒，
   "R"的意思是正确，因为她永远都是对的。
   将以上字母串在一起就是“母亲（mother）”，
   这个词说出了我整个的世界。
                     --霍华德•约翰逊