1.一些大学生认为职业选择应该以符合兴趣为出发点
2.也有大学生认为应该看是否有好的发展前景
3.我的观点
>>范文背诵
On the Choice of Career
In recent years, there is no consensus of opinions among college students about choice of career. Some students are in favor of the view that when choosing a job, interest plays the key part and should be thought about firstly; while others take a completely different side, firmly believing that prosperity is more worthwhile.
People holding the first view think that interest will result in more happiness and satisfaction at work, with which they could work in a more relaxing way and make progress more easily. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression due to lack of interest. However, holders of the second view argue that one should pay more attention to the career prosperity while making a choice, which will surely lead to prosperity of a person himself sooner or later. Therefore, they believe that it is career prosperity that counts most.
Personally, I deem that prosperity is the right element to think about because career prosperity can bring about one's success both in career and in life. In this sense, only career prosperity can bring a person happiness and satisfaction in the long run.
>>亮点词汇
①consensusn. 一致意见
②be in favor of支持,赞同
③prosperityn.发展前途
④worthwhilea.有价值的,值得的
⑤satisfactionn.满足感
⑥suffer from遭受……之苦
⑦depressionn.抑郁,沮丧情绪
⑧countv.很重要,有价值
⑨in the long run从长远来看
>>文章点评
第一段提出职业选择问题,指出大学生对此问题有不同的观点和态度。第二句中连词that引导同位语从句,解释说明view的内容;分号后由连词while 引起对比,并使用believing引导的分词结构作伴随状语。
第二段对两种不同的观点进行分析。第一种认为大学生择业应该以兴趣为出发点,因为这样可以在工作中获得更多的愉悦和满足感;第二种认为职业选择应该更注重发展前景,理由是有前景的工作可以使个人有更好的发展。末句使用了六级写作加分句型——强调句,句子结构为“It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+其余部分”。例如:It is my parents who have put so much pressure on me.(给我施加如此多压力的人是我的父母。)
第三段阐述自己的观点,提出职业前景应该是职业选择中更被注重的内容,因为从长远来看,只有具有职业前景的工作才能给人带来幸福感和满足感。末句使用only位于句首的部分倒装结构,为六级写作亮点句型。
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