大学英语作文：捐款　Donating Money on Campus

　　1． 如今校园里经常会出现大学生捐款的现象（为同学或者别人）

　　2． 你怎么看待这种现象？

　　【范文】

　　Recently many university students launch spontaneous donations for helping classmates suffering from serious illnesses or victims in disasters. Along with the behavior of donating, the donation amount has become a controversial topic. Some even hold the opinion that the amount is a standard for measuring love. The more amounts are donated, the more help the needed can get.

　　I support that donation for the needed is a kind of behavior which shows kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion, benefiting in improving interpersonal relationship and building up a harmonious society. What matters a lot is not how much money is donated, but the care and support hidden behind.

　　All in all, the behavior of donation itself should be encouraged, but it shouldn’t become a competition. The money donated cannot be equated with the love and the meaning hidden. Every penny is an expression of love.

　　【点评】

　　文章首段引出要讨论的话题—--大学生捐款现象，并引出由这一现象衍生出的人们对捐款金额的争议，甚至有的人认为捐款数目越多，需要获得帮助人受益越多。第二段提出自己对捐款一事的看法---捐款是一种行善积德，无私奉献，大公无私的行为，有助于改善人际关系，创建和谐社会。最后一段进行归纳总结，说明应该鼓励捐款这一行为，但不应该将捐款视为一种“金钱”的竞争，无论捐多捐少，每一分每一厘都意义深重。

　　第一段中launch spontaneous donations表示“发起自发捐款”，后面for 接的是捐款救助的对象；第二段中improving interpersonal relationship表示“改善人际关系”，building up a harmonious society表示“创建和谐社会”；第三段中的cannot be equated with表示“与……相提并论”。