美国GRE写作argument全部官方范文分析(8)(3)

　　-- there are alternative explanations for the facts uncovered by the survey.

　　Each of these points is analyzed insightfully and in 美国GREat detail.

　　The writer demonstrates mastery of the elements of effective writing.

　　The organization is clear and logical; in fact, the organizational plan outlined in the first paragraph is followed to the letter in the second through fourth paragraphs.

　　The writing is fluent -- transitions guide the reader from point to point in each paragraph; sentence structures are varied appropriately; diction is apt.

　　Minor flaws (e.g., the typographical error "quesiton") do not detract from the overall outstanding quality of this critique.

　　For all of these reasons, the essay earns a score of 6.

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