GMAT真题:2010年8月作文（至8.31）（十九）

　　2010.8.21——8.31 GMAT作文机经 AA篇

　　AA24 有一个调查发现现在的人对健康饮食很有兴趣，而健康饮食的一个方法就是吃有机食品。于是一个健身机构的经理就说，要在每个机构里设置一个有机食品的店，这样的话就可以增加利润了。

　　考古

　　V1: 考到的是说一个gym做了一个调查，说他们的customers is interested in eating healthier.而organic food没有农药，很绿色。所以他们觉得要在他们的三个gym的location都开一个organic food section。并且说这个organic food的想法之前都没有人想到过。所以在nation大量推广这个想法之前，他们在自己的gym里开个organic food sections一定能提高他们的profits.

　　V2: A survey shows that our consumers are more cared about eating healthier. One way to eat healthy is to eat organic food, which is free of fertilizer and pesticide. Our city has no organic food store currently, so we can establish one in our city. We can open organic food store in our gyms so that we can expect that the profits of our gyms, which stayed the same for a year, would increase.

　　AA25 The following appeared in the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper.

　　“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

　　提纲：

　　1.对事故的反映时间诚然是评价服务质量的一个因素但并不是唯一的因素.所以仅仅因为东区的商业救护班的反映时间短就认定商业救护办的服务更好是gratuitous的.

　　2.就算东区的商业班的服务质量更好也并不意味着,西区用商业班就会有一样的成效.因为东西区的情况是不同的.很可能西区的志愿者更有服务,献身意识.

　　3.此外除非商业班收十分昂贵的服务费用或者有十分多的事故事实这些都是不可能的, 改成商业是不见得就可以给该镇增加很多税收的.所以把这一点作为理由是不正确的.

　　1.错误类比 两个城市不一样，很可能因为西和东的不一样，比如，路的情况traffic condition。可能东的车辆更好。服务的态度更好。

　　而且没有说东的志愿情况如何，很可能东的志愿比商业的快。

　　2.草率的判断：就算是商业的更快，也不一定更好。反映时间不是唯一的因素，有其他——比如服务的质量，态度，器材等等。

　　另外，除非商业可以charge considerable fees 或者 accident rate非常高，否则未必带来可观的revenue。

　　A. In the first place, the arguer ignores other factors that might account for the longer average response time as revealed bu the recent review.

　　B. In the second place, the arguer infairly reduces better patient care to shorter response time to accidents.

　　C. Finally, the arguer fails to support the claim that hiring a commercial ambulance service would automatically raise revenue for West Cambria.

（责任编辑：申月月）