成功的作文：
一、Styles of Living
1．有些人愿意和父母居住在一起
2．有些人想自己独立居住
3．我的看法
Some people enjoy living together with their parents after they have grown up. They hold the opinion because , living with parents , they can take better care of their parents and vice versa. Meanwhile , they can turn to their parents for help if they get into trouble or have some difficulties. To them, life in a big family seems to be more enjoyable than that in a small family.
Others, however , prefer to live separately. They cherish the idea to be independent of their parents, seek more freedom and wish to have a place of their own, in which they can do what they like. Bedsides , they don’t want to be overprotected by their parents but long for chance to face the society by themselves.
As to me , I like an independent life style in spite of the fact I love my parents. Different generations have different life styles and values. What one generations likes may not be another generation’s fondness. Living separately , each generation can enjoy different value. In addition , by leading an independent life , I can train my character and develop my own ability to deal with things encountered in my life.
二、To Be a small Fish in a Big Pond or a Big Fish in a Small Pond?
1．在大企业工作的特点
2．在小企业工作的特点
3．我的选择
Just as there are
distinct differences between being a small fish is a big pond and a big fish in a small pond, so it is with working as a subordinate in a large enterprise and presiding in a small firm.
With the former, you can derive a deep sense of satisfaction from being a member of a well-known organization such as General Motors, or the Bell Telephone System. You have the opportunities of learning from experienced executives and knowing about the standard working process.
With the latter, you have greater responsibilities and your decision may bring immediate effect. Normally you are expose to various experiences and expected to do a great many thing without much help or guidance.
Personally I prefer to work in a small enterprise, where my prospect of promotion is good as long as I work hard. To tell the truth , I’d rather become a well-known and important figure within my own small pond.
三、Online Education
1.目前网络教育形成热潮
2.我认为这股热潮的的原因是……
3.我对网络教育的评价
Being online is no longer something strange in our life. To some degree, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends far and near. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”. That is online education.
Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today ,modern science and technology is developing with lightening speed. To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However , due to the great pace of modern society , many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.
Personally , I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Most of all ,with online education, we can sick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.

第一档次文章 (17—20分)：

例1：

This is a very interesting picture of a lovely American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume with a sweet smile on her face. She wears a pearl necklace, colorful ribbon, ear rings, and oilier decorating things that are characteristic of the clothes of a Chi­nese minority nationality. It is obvious that as a result of our open-door policy, more and more foreigners visit China and become inter­ested in our national culture, which is making it go international.

There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon. With the rapid development of technology and economy, the world is becoming smaller and smaller, and international cultural exchanges have become more and more frequent, which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.

As Chinese citizens, we should respect our own national culture and learn useful things from the cultures of different nations, which will enable us to make great progress in many ways. I believe a hap­py and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to pro­mote cultural development both nationally and internationally.(179 words)

这篇短文内容切题，包括了题中所列的两部分内容。第一段里对这个美国女孩的描写准确生动，也清楚表达出对此现象的解释和自己的评述。文字比较连贯；句式也有变化，句子结构和用词正确。但文章长度稍微少于所要求的字数。

例2：

Nowadays, "national culture or international culture" has be­come a matter of great concern for the general public in our society, especially for those who are confronted with this problem. Now let's take a look at the American girl in traditional Chinese costume. She looks very beautiful with a nice smile on her face. It seems that the girl is very fond of the Chinese costume.

Obviously, the picture indicates that a culture of one nation may become international, which is beneficial to all the human be­ings. Since China has opened its door widely to the outside world, many people from different countries want to visit China. They will accept and love the Chinese culture as a whole. In addition, Chinese culture should be well shared with foreign people who have shown their great interest in it. Meanwhile, the Chinese people are also ex­posed to foreign cultures when more foreign people come to China. In this way people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire better understanding of each other and live peacefully in this world.

My opinion about this cultural phenomenon is that a national culture should become international. This is because the culture of any nation is a kind of precious heritage, and belongs to the whole mankind.(213 words)

这篇短文内容切题，清楚表达出题中所列的两部分内容。文章紧扣主题，句子与句子之间连贯，过渡自然。句子结构正确，句式也有变化。遣词造句得当，语言流畅，文章长度符合要求。

第二档次文章 (13——16分)：

例3：

As is shown in this picture, we can see clearly that a charming American girl who is in traditional Chinese costume is smiling to us. The purpose of this picture is that with the development of globalization, great changes have taken place in the world, and one nation's culture has been accepted by the people from another culture.

Why does this phenomenon appear? I think there are several reasons as follows. First, with policy of opening the door to the outside world being well implemented in China, a large number of peo­ple from other countries like to visit China and become interested in traditional Chinese culture. Second, due to the easy and fast communications, the distance between various nations has been shortened, and people can get in touch with each other easily. Therefore, cultures from various nations can be exchanged and different cultures can merge together quickly.

In my opinion, people from different countries should learn and share different cultures. Each culture has its own advantages which might be beneficial to another culture. Besides, there is a trend that globalization is going to be accepted in the whole world. Therefore national cultures should gradually become international.(196 words)

这篇短文内容切题，包括了题中所列的内容，比较清楚地表达出其中的内涵，但是对图片中美国女孩的描述不够。短文阐述层次分明，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构基本正确，用词有极少量错误。文章长度符合要求。属于第二档次中的上档。

例4：

As the picture shows, an American girl in traditional Chinese costume, with a smile on her face, is presented. Obviously, the girl enjoys the culture of traditional Chinese, as many people do. It indi­cates that a culture of one country will go to international.

Many advantages can be seen when a national culture becomes international. First, it can show the outside world its native cul­ture. For example, China, as a country with a long history, may share her profound culture with the rest of the world. Other coun­tries may benefit from the traditional Chinese culture in many as­pects. Second, it will promote communications and exchanges be­tween different cultures from various countries. From my experience, I was very exciting and astonished when 1 had a chance to know American culture through the English language. In my college life, I am lucky to have several foreign friends. Ideally, my foreign friends and 1 have learned a lot from each other about the cultures. Third, it is nice for people from different cultural backgrounds to live together and share the different cultures.

In a word, man's life will be made more colorful when

National cultures have become international. www.liuxuepaper.com

这篇短文内容切题，包括了题中所列的内容，比较清楚地表达出其中的内涵，但是对图片中美国女孩的描述不够。短文阐述层次分明，并通过举例来帮助说明。文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构也基本正确，但用词有少量错误，有些地方词汇搭配不当。如：等等。文章长度符合要求。

第三档次文章 (9——12分)：

例5：

As seen from the above picture, an American girl in traditional Chinese costume is smiling to us with friendly looking. There are a lot of bright and beautiful accessories on her body. She dresses in Chinese costume, which is a symbol on behalf of the minority people in our country. From the picture we can draw a conclusion that cul­tures are national and international, and no limit between different countries. Even if growing up in various countries, we have still the same interests in cultures, not only in America, but also other coun­tries.

In my view, it is no exaggeration to say that cultures are the most important factor, which can make the mankind progress and benefit a great deal from the communication in cultures, other than economic development. I am of the opinion that, in reaction to the phenomenon of cultures tending to be national and international, China should hold the key to success in the 21st century both in economy and cultures. We are required by the world people to open our cultures. Only in this situation can China act in cultures as an important role in the world stage. Of course, faced with the entry in foreign cultures, we must take steps to keep up the alertness against bad minds. My argument to the point is that we can’t throw the baby away with the bath water.(230 words )

这篇短文内容切题，基本包括题中所列的内容，也基本清楚地表达其内涵。但句子结构和用词有少量错误，有些地方词汇搭配不当，文字也不精炼。文章长度符合要求。

第五档次文章 (1——4分)：

例6 ：

In this picture an American girl in traditional Chinese costume is smiling to me, flower circling her head and Chinese Changming lock in her chest.

Lovely girl and lovely Chinese traditional costume make me thi­nk. China has many treasures, traditional costume, traditional cul­ture and so on. In its long history it beared excellent culture, beau­tiful scene and advanced mind. We have the excellent traditional cul­ture. Today it belongs to us Chinese and it belong to the world. China need world, the world need China. (84 words )

这篇小短文虽然基本按要求写作，但是无结构、无明显主题。内容表达混乱，句子与句子之间不连贯，而且严重受汉语表达习惯影响。词汇搭配不当，词汇量很小，表达不清楚。并且有很多语法错误。写作长度不符合要求。只有少数句子可理解。

例7：

The American girl who in traditional Chinese costume is very lovely, and she is fit for the clothes. May lie somebody would think that she is a Chinese girl.

Any countries has their own national costume, and almost of these costume are very beautiful, perhaps, some of them can be say "project!"

So our cultures went countries, we happy see it. We happy also see their culture in China. So we loved that all. (74 words )

这根本算不上什么短文，而仅仅是把一些不连贯的句子拼凑在一起，有很多语法错误，只有极少数句子可理解。写作长度根本谈不上符合要求。无主题思想。

一篇好的作文应基本达到：

1）有较好的写作基础，文章流畅，遣词造句不当，文章结构完整，内容符合要求；

2）语法基本正确；

3）句法基本准确，句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯；

4）有一定词汇量，字数符合要求；

5）说理清楚，内容充实。

6）就小作文而言，还要做到格式与语域正确。

7）书写干净整洁。如果书写较差，以致影响交际，分数会降低一个档次。