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2005年高考英语满分作文及名师评析(2)

时间:2010-08-27来源:作文地带整理栏目:高考英语作文作者:英语学习 英语作文收藏:收藏本文
第一节情景作文(20分) 美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少

  第一节情景作文(20分)

  美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

  注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。

  2.词数不少于60。

  Dear Jeff,

  I'm Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I'm very happy to learn that you're going to stay with my family while you're in Beijing.

  While you are here, we'll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You'll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we'll eat at the school dining hall. I'm sure you'll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It'll be a lot of fun.

  If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We'll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

  Best wishes,

  Li Hua

  [作文地带点评]

  这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的,第一,作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整,内容充实而丰富,结构紧凑,有层次感;第二,本文没有采用华丽的辞藻,但用词十分恰当,段落过渡自然,令人耳目一新。

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