词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上

　　邮资自己付

　　注意：

　　1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

　　2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

　　2、参考词汇：邮资-postage

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I'll show you around in turn.

　　However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .

　　Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I'll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.

　　I'm eager to receive your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li hua

　　[作文地带点评]

　　本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。

　　【重庆卷】

　　【试题回放】

　　加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言，文化culture。

　　假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

　　你怎样得知David的愿望

　　你愿意成为他的朋友

　　你打算如何帮助他

　　你盼望他的回复

　　注意：

　　1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好

　　2、字数：100词左右

　　3、在答题卡上作答

　　Dear David,

　　I'm a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe I'm your good choice.

　　China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.

　　There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. I'll be looking forward to your reply. I'll show you around our great China if you come to China.

　　Yours sincerely ,

　　Li hua

　　[作文地带点评]

　　本文的语言非常流畅，我们可以看到，本文虽没有华丽的辞藻，但是语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。