审题:
1、体裁：记叙文
2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故
3、人称：第一人称 I
4、要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road
A car hit the man while he was crossing the road. From liuxuepaper.com.
I noticed the driver was a young woman and the car was yellow.
The car number was AC864.
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It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an old man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry.
The car did’t stop and drove off at a great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua