基础写作 品牌MP3出故障写信给厂家反映问题
【写作内容】
假设你是李华,你新买的某外国品牌MP3出了故障,现你写信到其公司反映问题。
1.购买日期:上个月;
2.故障:一周前屏幕坏了,看不见显示内容;
3.已跟当地销售商家投诉,但其不能解决;
4.要求:更换一台新的,如不行则要求退货、拿回货款。
【写作要求】
1.必须使用5个规范的英语句子表达全部的内容。
2.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
3.开头和结尾已为你写好(不算入要求的5句话里)。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
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I am looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for your attention. I’m here writing to complain about your product.
Last month, I bought an MP3 made by your company, which brought me enjoyment for some time. But last week, something went wrong with the screen and I can’t see anything on it. I have talked about this with the shop which sold me this MP3, but they/it couldn’t do anything about it. Having no choice, I turn to you for help. I hope you can get me a new one or return my money to me.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua