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 十四、（2009.广东卷）

第一节  基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:

 [写作内容]

根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容:

1. 采访的时间、对象和主题；

2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数；

3. 专家解读。

 [写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

 [评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【参考范文】

Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ short-sightedness. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No. 1 in the world, are short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness. He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises. What’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.

【解析】

本文题材贴近学生实际生活，这个话题真正的做到“话题来源于学生实际生活”。近视眼是每个校园所必不可少的现象，是学生校园生活得隐形热点。因此今年的基础写作题目让每个学生都有话可说。考生要注意三大要点和表格内容，恰当表达即可。

【专家简评】

本题话题为近视问题，天津卷曾涉及过（07天津卷：How to Protect Our Eyesight）。但角度有不同。广东卷侧重的是问题本身的描述，而天津则是强调的如何保护视力。不过，能有做天津卷的经验，对广东卷也就不会有难的感觉。更何况广东卷所给信息非常充分，对于考生而言，剩下的主要是组织句子了。需要特别指出的是，陈说性质的文体其核心在于陈述和说明（包括介绍），即讲清楚一桩事情。

第二节  读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. That’s right—sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.

The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable. How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?

* 考拉即树袋熊

 [写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；

2. 然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括:

（1）人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；

（2）假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应；

（3）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。

 [写作要求]

1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

 [评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

【参考范文】

The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.

The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people. Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have. But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals. From liuxuepaper.com.

If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed. No having peaceful surroundings to sleep, don’t you suffer restless and fidgets. No doubt we do and so do the animals.

I think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.

【解析】

今年的读写任务让学生就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”展开议论。议论文的写作有助于培养学生正确的价值观，纠正不正确的价值观。今年的读写任务暗中旨在培养学生保护野生动物的观念、把多一点的空间还给动物的观念、与动物和谐共存的观念。

如果考生从“应该禁止游客和动物拍照”这一观点入手的话就迎合了阅读材料，同时也能够受到改卷老师的青睐。

【专家简评】

自2007年广东卷改革以来，写作部分的两个试题在写作要求上均过于详细，控制程度很高。尤其是后者，尽管是阅读后的写作，但要领已经被列出，实际上难度已经大大下降。当然，广东卷这么做的主要目的无外乎便于教师阅卷，收缩考生的思维，不给考生跑题的机会。但是若往深的追问，本题给学生的思维空间并不多，这个值得考量。三年来，广东卷已经在短文写作上逐渐形成定势。
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