2010高考英语满分作文名师点评
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假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。
比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台
注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛-talent show
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. From liuxuepaper.com.
Yours,
Li Hua
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从整体上说，本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。本文的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来时使用。
小编建议：英语作文