2011高考英语作文真题（江苏卷）范文及点评

书面表达（满分25分）
 
下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英文写一篇短文。
 
你的短文应包含一下内容：
 
1、描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；
 
2、结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；
 
3、举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。
 

作文地带提示您一定要注意写作要求：
 
1、可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
 
2、词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
 
3、作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
 
The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.

参考原版范文：
 
The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.From liuxuepaper.com.
 
All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally enagaed in my own study, I seldom pay my attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.

作文地带整理点评：
图片展现了孩子为母亲提包的一个场景，要求考生根据给出的场景对其进行理解并用英文阐述。就图片本身而言，其表达的信息非常明确清晰，且贴近生活，考生容易理解，在审题的过程中不易出现偏题、无话可说、不知如何下笔的现象。整个题目的立意和深入并不难，关键是把握住"感恩"这个主题，由此发散开来可以谈到的话题相当广泛，比如：父母子女之间，老师学生之间，还有作为个体和社会之间等等。总体而言，本次高考的题型设计新颖，主题立意明确，贴近学生，同时也让学生在英文的写作当中，把握了时代的主题。