高中第一篇英语作文练习

话说，xiao dong不善与人交流，所以谢写了封信给专家Miss Wang。

现在，我要代表Miss Wang来给Xiao Dong回信。

Dear xiao dong,

I'm sorry you are having trouble in making friengs.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you:

Frist,why not join in the club,have a active communication with other.If you do this,you can get along with people more easily.

Secondly,you should always help other.That way,to let people koow you are helpful.

Thirdly,it would be a good idea if you dare to show your talent,don't be shy.By doing this,more people will like you.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Yours,

Miss Wang

不知道会不会有很多语病，大多是照着中文那样乱翻译成英文。

第一篇认认真真写的英语作文，希望老师可以给个高一点的分。