高三英语调研作文范文及下水作文　　

　　<苏北四市2010届高三第二次调研考试>原来提供的范文，基本完成写作任务，也属上乘作文。但是，窃以为，原来范文第二段、第三段中表达的形式不够丰富，高级词汇不多。为此，我做了大幅度修改。 　　

　　【原来的范文】

　　We all have some keys in life, some visible and others invisible. In our daily life, it’s necessary and convenient for us to take the visible ones. If we are careless to lose them, we’ll feel upset and our life may be troublesome.

　　In fact, some invisible keys are also important to us in our life. As students, we study at school every day. By listening to the teachers, we own a key to research and discussion, and to learning how to get knowledge. Through reading, we get a key to opening the door of mystery and sharing the ideas of great people of the past and the present. From writing, we have a key to tapping the potential of our own, finding another colorful world and realizing a meaningful way of learning and living.

　　In a word, the two kinds of keys are equally necessary in our life. To us students, it’s perhaps more important to own a key to opening the gate of wisdom.

　　【Sam下水作文】

　　We all have keys in life, some visible and others invisible.

　　In our daily life, we cannot go without visible keys. Everyone needs them to ensure their privacy and the safety of their valuable possessions. With the right key, we can open a door, unlock a drawer or start a car. But if we are careless to lose them, our life may be in trouble.

　　Actally, some invisible keys also play a vital role in our growth and development. For example, hard work is a key to success. Nothing great is achieved without our efforts. Just as the great inventor Edison once said, genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent perspiration. Perseverance is another invisible key. Sometimes life can be challenging. Only determination can help us keep trying to achieve our goal in spite of difficulties.

　　In one word, the two kinds of keys are equally important in our life. The visible keys should be kept in a safe place because they enable us to live a simple and convenient life. In a similar way, the invisible ones should be kept in mind because they open the door to success.