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加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice,希望结识一位中国朋友,以便学习中国的语言,文化culture。
假设你是李华,请在看到这则启事后,用英文给David发一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:
你怎样得知David的愿望
你愿意成为他的朋友
你打算如何帮助他
你盼望他的回复
严格遵照作文地带如下要求:
1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好
2、字数:100词左右
3、在答题卡上作答
Dear David,
I’m a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe I’m your good choice.
China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.
There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. I’ll be looking forward to your reply. I’ll show you around our great China if you come to China.
Yours sincerely ,
Li hua
[名师点评]
本文的语言非常流畅,我们可以看到,本文虽没有华丽的辞藻,但是语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用,如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出,同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。
2007年高考英语作文名师解析与指导 请参考:http://www.liuxuepaper.com/gaokao/20100719/3612.html