上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:

1.农场情况;

2.采摘过程;

3.个人感受。

注意:

1.词数100 左右;

2.题目已为你写好。

参考作文地带整理范文

My weekend

In order to give the students a taste of farm life, our school organized a fruit-picking activity on a farm last weekend, which turned out to be

extremely fruitful and meaningful.

The farm is far from the city, so we took a bus there. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.

Upon arrival, we were overwhelmed by a sea of fresh fruits and vegetables.They were so inviting that we couldn't resist picking them. The picking lasted all morning. Tired as we were, a great sense of happiness and achievement flooded over us.

This fruit-picking experience impresses on us the importance of labor and the saying “No pains, no gains".

高考英语作文评分标准

第五档(很好):(21-25分)----皇宫别墅或乡村庭院

1.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

2.表达思想清楚，语言通顺，连贯性较好。

3.语法结构或词汇方面基本没有错误，但能使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇;具备较强的语言运用能力。

第四档(好):(16-20分)----小区精装房

1.基本达到了预期的写作目的。

2.表达思路清楚，语言连贯，全文结构紧凑。

3.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。

第三档(适当):(11-15分)----普通装修

基本切题，有些地方表达思路不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中间一些是严重错误。

第二档(较差):(6-10分)----地基成型

基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。

第一档(差):(0-5分)----装修材料到场

条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分行文均有错误，且多为严重错误。

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