Please write an article of about 120 words to give your opinions about”Efficient Ways of Reading” which will be published in your school newspaper.
Efficient Ways of Reading
Books can be our friends and our teachers in our soul,they can teach us anything. But what should we do to read efficiently? In my point of view,there are three ways as follows.
To start with, we should read with pleasure which can relax ourselves first. A relaxed emotion is more efficient than a nervous one when reading.
Then,it’s better to guess the meaning when we meet new words.We needn’t know every word exactly but we can guess the meaning of it from the context.More importantly,it’s also a good way to train us in reading.
Last but not least, it’s advised to understand the meaning of the whole article and even each sentence exactly. Sometimes the author’s main idea is under the words, we should read the article carefully to catch the main words for better understanding. We can also understand some difficult sentences with our own knowledge or from the context. It’s also a good way to search the background on the Internet.
批 改 老 师：maotouying
评 分：97分
级 别：优秀
批 改：1.In my point of view,直接用In my view/opinion就可以了，这是一个习惯性表达，固定用法。
2.We needn’t know every word exactly but we can guess the meaning of it from the context.need是实意动词，后面要用不定式to.另外文中 的but是转折连词，这里并没有转折的意思，本句改为We needn’t to know every word exactly ，and we can guess the meaning of it from the context.或者改为We needn’t to know every word exactly ，because we can guess the meaning of it from the context.
参考例句：(作文地带)1.In my view/opinion, there are three ways as follows.
2.We needn’t to know every word exactly ，and we can guess the meaning of it from the context.
3.We needn’t to know every word exactly ，because wecan guess the meaning of it from the context .
点评：本文从结构上来看，属于总-分结构，后面三段分别表述，结构清晰。
本文从内容上来看，内容丰富，表述全面。
本文从遣词造句上细看，不仅有高中词汇，文中还有大学生四、六级词汇，说明作者的词汇量非常大。
从本篇文章来看，一个初中学生写出一篇具有大学六级水平的作文，是非常难得的，作者可能是经过了刻苦努力和专门的语言训练。
给 分 理 由批改第1处：文中表达语法上不算错，不做扣分处理；
批改第2处：动词不定式使用错误扣1分，关联词使用不当，扣2分。
最后得分97分。
