The day we were looking forward to came at last--a week's military training began.During the training, each of us did his (her) part in earnest. We drilled more than six hours a day, though it was very hot at the time.

　　In the blazing sun, we always tried to measure up to the high standards which were demanded . Sweat streamed down and we wouldn't wipe it off. Olny three days later our faces were tanned. We felt happy and proud of it .Our platoon officer was a young PLA man, about twenty years old. He was very strict with us during the training and very kind to us afterwards. By talking with him, we came to know not only more information about army life, but also about military affairs.

　　The military training gave us good discipline. It brought us great happiness, too. We'll never forget it.

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　　我们期待的为期七天的军训终于开始了。在训练中，我们每个人都认真地完成自己的任务。尽管天气很热，我们每天仍旧训练六个多小时。

　　在强烈的阳光下，我们总是试图做到要求的高标准。汗水不停的流淌，我们都顾不得擦掉。仅仅三天过后，我们的脸就晒黑了。我们感到高兴和骄傲。我们的排长是一位年轻的解放军军官，大约二十岁。他在训练中对我们要求很严格，但下来后对我们特别号。通过和他聊天我们不仅知道了更多的军队生活的信息，而且知道了更多的军事知识。

　　军训让我们养成了良好的纪律，也给我们带来了很多欢乐。我们永远都不会忘记。