作者：小伍哥 大学四年级
Today when I stayed in  dormitory,I got a phone call from my brother.He told me that he would be on a business trip to Nanning on Wednesday .He would fly there with his boss and he had to buy a suitcase,so he asked me to go shopping with him.

I took the subway to gold rush station from Mega Center North.I arrived there at about 4 o'clock.And soon my brother went here to meet me.We talked about where to buy for a little while.For the reason that I used to find some supermarket whick sold suitcase at ShangXiaJiu so we decided to went there.We compared the suitcases in several shop,and finally chose a black one which was worth 300RMB in a surpermarket.

In order to give my brother a farewell,We went to eat hot pot buffet in BeiJing Street.When we were back to Mega Center,it was about half past 22 o'clock.What a wonderful day we had.I wish my brother all the best in NanNing.

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【作文地带点评】这是一篇相当优秀的英语记叙文，小伍哥的弟弟要到南宁出差了，就叫小伍哥与他一起去买行李箱，然后为了给弟弟饯行兄弟俩又到北京路的八爪鱼自助火锅店吃火锅，兄弟俩吃饱喝足回到大学城已经是晚上10点半了，多么愉快的一天啊。作者最后一段表达了兄弟俩愉快的心情，同时也祝弟弟在南宁工作一切顺利，全文用语准确地道，是一篇不可多得的优秀范文。