解析:分析该题目,推荐的写作思路是谈及发展旅游业的原因,在分别论证其利好和弊端,作者的观点应以支持为主,对于弊端可以提出建议的解决途径。
分支观点的支持句例证如下:
The most striking merit of boosting tourism is that it could generate immense economic value. South Africa could severe as a perfect example, which used to poverty-stricken and behind place. As tourism booms, it now becomes one of the most promising and eye-catching scenic spots. When tourists do their sightseeing, they will buy local souvenirs, dine in restaurants and seek accommodations, hence, the prosperity of tourism spurs national economy and multiplies tax revenue.
发展旅游业的最显著的利好就是能够创造经济价值。南非就是很好的例子,过去的南非落后贫穷,旅游业的发展使得南非成为最有前景和惹眼的旅游地之一。当游客观光游览之时,会购物,就餐,住宿等,因此旅游业的繁荣刺激了国民经济,增加了税收。
雅思写作高分原则二:逻辑为纲要
雅思写作的第二项评分标准为Coherence and cohesion(内容连贯与篇章衔接)。其实,无论是英语写作还是汉语写作,都讲究一个谋篇布局的逻辑清晰,都讲究一个论证过程的起承转合。很多烤鸭的英语作文失分体现在行文的逻辑矛盾以及结构松散。在笔者改写的雅思作文中,有的文章在首段提出支持题目观点,论证结束后却是在反驳观点。还有文章只是简单句的堆砌组合而非衔接紧密的锻炼。其弊病在于文章在宏观和微观上都缺少清晰的布局。因此,雅思写作的第二项高分密码为逻辑为纲要。宏观上,雅思文章都应该应分成三部分,即首段,主体段(主体段可以根据不同题目再进行细分),尾段。首段提出观点,主体段论证观点,尾段再次亮明观点,这种逻辑结构前后呼应,在议论文写作中十分有效。微观上,论证的过程要力求清晰有序。具体体现在各句间以及各段间要有清晰衔接词汇。建议烤鸭按功能归类整理各类路标词汇。在平常的写作训练中就注意文章的连贯与篇章的衔接。
雅思写作常见的写作思路有:分析问题解决问题(政府工作报告类写作文体),讨论利弊或者两种观点(平衡分析),针对观点类提问让步反驳(你在多大程度上同意原题观点)。
现在以让步反驳来举例:
题目:
Some people think that maintaining public libraries is a waste of time because computer technologies have already replaced its function? To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为计算机科技已经取代了图书馆的功能是否同意?
宏观布局:
首段:背景介绍 + 有待反驳的观点 + 写作意图(明确表达不支持或是不完全支持)
二段:有待反驳的观点及其合理性
三段:反驳对方观点 + 提出自己的观点
尾段:让步对方观点的合理性,强调我方观点。
具体论证:(三段反驳)
Yet, on no account can we lose sight of the immense value of libraries. Firstly, although it is easy to acquire and utilize e-books, it is far from easy, for millions people, to change their deeply-rooted habits of reading in libraries. Still, libraries could serve the function of communication and entertainment. A case in point is that many retired men and young adults like to pay a visit to library for recreation. Lastly, a good library with large collection of books is the symbol of top university as well as civilized city. The ideal academic atmosphere created by libraries can never be matched by e-reading.
翻译:然而,任何情况下我们都不能忽视图书馆的巨大价值,首先,尽管很容易得到和使用电子书籍,很多人难以改变根深蒂固的在图书馆中阅读的习惯。第二,图书馆是交流和休闲的好去处,例如很多退休老人和年轻人都把去图书馆当成了享乐。第三,一个藏书丰富的图书馆是名校和文明城市的象征。电子阅读永远不能营造图书馆的良好的学习氛围。liuxuepaper.com