考研写作课堂笔记：结尾评说段

例一：

2002年 身着中国服装的美国女孩的结尾评述

1 应该高兴祖国的文化在被接受

2 应该作为促进文化的世界传播

3 只有中国的文化被世界认识，我们作为中国人才能更好的融入世界更好的和他国交流。

I can hardly hide my happiness when I see the picture. It is rather delighted that our own national culture is being received by people from other countries. We should further improve the process of spread our culture to the world Only when the China’s culture is received by the whole world, can we be expected to emerge to the global trend and better communicate with other country.

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例二：

2003年温室的花朵经不起风雨 的最后评述段

1.      作为一个合格的现代青年，我认为一定要自己严格要求自己从而达到自己的目标。

2.      在生活中，我们不能依赖父母的关怀因为我们早晚都要依靠自己来面对生活中的种种挑战。

3.      我们应该为了未来的激烈竞争的社会做好准备学会独立

4.      只有这样，我们才有望于在社会中积极面对挑战抓住机会。

As far as a qualified modern youth is concerned, I stronly recommend that we have to discipline ourselves so as to attain our ambitions. We can depend on our parents’ care for sooner or later we would rely on ourselves to meet various challenges in our lives. We should know how to behave independently so as to make good preprations for the competition in the coming future.Only by doing so, can we expect to seize the opportunity and meet the challenge in the society.