2010考研英语作文:申请单人宿舍
Dear Sir or Madam,
   I am a freshman from Department of Chinese language and literature in this college.I am writing the letter in purpose of asking for a single room. this primary reasons are as follows :Firstly, I live in a dormitory which I share with another student who always smokes before going to bed;Secondly, my roommate inviting friends to vist so freguently that I do not work there. I wonder if it is convenient for you to render me a single room next term. My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. From liuxuepaper.com.
     I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

参考点评：要注意写信的格式，格式也是有分的。总体写得不错，个别动词的用法需注意下，注意下动词的时态问题即可。继续加油，问题不大，结构也不错，主体部分写了两个原因，之后也适时地表达了换房间的请求，而且语气上把握得很好，收信的对方是校长，所以态度一定要客气，这点很好。继续加油！希望你越写越好。