勿被表象所欺骗

Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) explain its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

审题谋篇

本题为提纲图画式作文。因此，题目要求中给出的图画和提纲是审题的关键。根据题目要求，需要写一篇160词~200词的短文。图中有两只兔子在拔胡萝卜，其中一只大一点的兔子选中了那个叶子比较多的胡萝卜，显得得意扬扬。而那只小兔子则只能沮丧地抓着自己的那一点萝卜叶子。然而，埋在地下的萝卜大小却与叶子的外形刚好相反。

图片主要揭示了两个道理：一个是不能只看事物的表面现象，另一个是只要坚持不懈就会有意外的收获。考生可以重点分析这两个层面，并发表自己的看法，提出自己的建议。

按照题目给出的提纲，第一段需要对图画进行简单描述，尤其是要描绘出图片中两只小白兔的行为和心理活动；第二段分析图画隐含的两个道理，一个是不能只看事物的表面现象，另一个是只要坚持不懈就会有意外的收获；第三段总结全文，重申自己的观点。

范文与译文

Don't Be Fooled by the Superficies

In the picture, there are two rabbits harvesting carrots. The big rabbit chooses a big bundle of flourishing leaves with exultation while the small rabbit holds a small bundle of wretched leaves, totally frustrated. Actually the sizes of the carrots under the ground are contrary to the sizes of the leaves seen above the ground.

The picture mainly tells us two morals. For one thing, one should not be fooled by the surface of things. Instead, he should investigate the whole thing before a conclusion is drawn finally. If the small rabbit digs its carrot out, it would not feel discouraged any more. For another, if the small rabbit finally feels disappointed and gives up the carrot just because of its small leaves, it would never know that its carrot is much bigger than its peer's. One should always hold determination in mind no matter what happens if he wants to achieve his goal. So long as he is persistent, he will finally get his reward.

In my opinion, one must not judge anything from its appearance. If one holds an objective attitude and never gives up halfway, he is sure to win in the end despite numerous defeats.

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