雅思写作范文：儿童广告，供考生参考学习。

　　大作文范文解析：

本题考查的是比较常见的广告话题，但此题注意扣住题目要求，防止跑题.请考生注意advertising aimed at children & negative effects & be banned.

　　大作文范文：

　　people nowadays, especially children, are continually seduced and intoxicated by varied forms of advertising, with its strategic maneuvers, addressing its seductive appeal of sale. Therefore, some people claim that the misleading commercials targeting children undoubtedly should be strictly forbidden.

　　Evidently, the vicious effects of business advertising on children can be hardly ignored.

　　In the eagerness of selling, a variety of commercials, more often than not, confuse the child’s perception. Children at an early age have not even developed a proper sense of their own identity, or learned to handle money; were they bombarded by misleading advertisements, these youngsters in the formative years would more likely associate status and self-worth with stuff, and look to external things such as fame and wealth for validation. This is the reason why the overwhelming number of children in China tend to get attracted to high-end brands that advertise clothes, shoes and other products.

　　Additionally, the advertising directed at children that contributes to excessive consumption of unhealthy food is responsible for the epidemic of child obesity. With so many attractive commercials, such as marketing junk foods, unhealthy beverages, and sugared cereals and candy, children’s health has been adversely affected. Owing to the delicious-looking foods being shown on screens every few minutes，Children see fit-looking adults munching on various junk foods and assume that they are healthy, but fail to understand the concept of advertising, which in turn has led to a surge in obesity, diabetes, and other conditions in young children.

　　However, never ever do we bar and limit the deleterious effects of advertisements on children, as kids gravitate toward all kinds digital devices by which advertisers have found sneakier ways to capture their attention. Nevertheless, it is practicable for parents, the guardians, to help children process the persuasive intent of the advertisement critically, despite the fact that children are more vulnerable to the appeal of commercials than adults.

　　In conclusion, to bar the all-pervading commercials directed at children is technically impossible. I am concerned that only by being guided and educated properly to tell the misinformation, can children avoid being targeted and overwhelmed by the viciously commercial advertising.

　　文章结构：

       第一段：引入背景+题目观点

　　第二段：广告确实给孩子造成一定负面影响，其一：广告误导孩子形成错误的认知观。

　　第三段：其二：广告误导孩子购买不健康食物，带来健康问题。

　　第四段：广告无处不在，很难彻底禁止，父母应该教导孩子辨别且抵制广告不良信息。

　　第五段：总结自己观点

　　大作文高分表达：

　　are continually seduced and intoxicated 不断地被诱惑

　　strategic maneuvers 战术策略

　　seductive appeal of sale. 强劲的销售力

　　developed a proper sense of their own identity, 对自己的身份有了正确的认识

　　in the formative years 价值观形成期

　　associate status and self-worth with stuff, 把地位和自我价值与事物联系起来

　　external things such as fame and wealth for validation. 靠外在的名誉和财富来证明自己

　　high-end brands 高端品牌

　　the epidemic of child obesity 爆发儿童肥胖症

　　gravitate toward 被...所吸引

　　sneakier ways 隐蔽的方式

　　process the persuasive intent 理解处理有劝说意图信息

　　more vulnerable to the appeal of commercials 更容易受到商业广告的诱惑

　　大作文写作高分结构：

　　more often than not, 频率插入语

　　with its strategic maneuvers, addressing its seductive appeal of sale. 分词目的状语/介词伴随状语

　　were they bombarded 虚拟倒装

　　This is the reason why 定从

　　that contributes to 定从

　　being shown on screens/

　　munching on various junk foods 分词后定

　　which in turn has led. 非限定定从

　　Never ever do 全倒装

　　it is practicable for parents, the guardians, to It形主

　　despite the fact that 同位语从句

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