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原文：

I got a low level in English of all ability. I know I should use chinese to express my opinion. I also know no one would take much time correcting my mistake.  Even so, I still hope you, my friends, to read my diary in my QQzone and leave your words.

原文翻译：

我英语能力及水平都比较低。虽然我知道怎么用中文去表达我的意见和想法。我也知道没有人愿意纠正我的错误。尽管如此，我还是希望你-我的朋友，能够阅读我的QQ空间内容，并留言。谢谢。

作文地带编辑分析并改写：

My English is very poor in all aspects. I know I should use chinese to express my opinion. I also know no one would  take much time to correct my mistake.  Even so, I still hope you, my friends, to read my diary in my QQzone and leave your  words,thanks.