人物的介绍

希望老师帮忙修改下语法错误，或者是添加一些适当的连词，如果能再加一些或者生动的句子把一些比较死板的句子改的更生动会更好！

    Yi Jianlian is a professional basketball player.He was born on October 27th,1987.He is from Guangdong China.He is 2.12 meters tall.At the age of 15,he joined CBA .He started playing for the National Basketball Team in January,2004.And he joined the American NBA in July,2007.He became the second Chinese member of American NBA after Yao Ming.He also has many hobbies.He likes listening to music and playing computer.And he is still trying his best to learn English.We are all proud of him.