文章细节：liuxuepaper.com 发表时间：2012-02-13 20:40
Recently , a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website . The pie chart shows that there are only 36.13% people belive in the school bus , 23.53%of them are not sure about that . To our surprise , up to 40.34% of the participants do not trust in school buses. In fact , there are many factors which lead to this condition . As can be seen from the column chart, 35.29% of the people who do not trust in school buses are afraid of useing abandoned vehicles. This is the most worrying factor . 24.37% of them worried about overload. As we all known, a few serious accidents happened because of that. There are also 21.35% of them worried that school buses may lack of safety equipments . Futher more, 18.49% of them are afraid of traveling at a dangerous speed . As far as I am concerned, these worrying about school buses is reasonable. In a way , most of school buses have different kinds of problems and some children may lose their life because of these problems . Only school can do solve these problems can people retrieve their trust in school buses.
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