作文地带题目：作文地带：考研英语作文，你让我说什么？
文章细节：作文地带 标题：作文地带：考研英语作文，你让我说什么？ 发表时间：2012-01-13 09:50
判卷的这回好办了。在考场上写:“即使面对困境也要保持乐观，an optimistic spirit is essential”，语法单词没有错误的话，至少混个及格吧，除非您写一个酗酒有害，就……
不过说正经的，这回的主题词还是给的很简单的，不像2007年那次。
然后就是写作了，看来判卷的已经有点烦了，不打算用绕来绕去的图画忽悠了，就一个主题乐观主题，你写吧。描述段其实并不难，按照上课的时候说的，一看数字名词、二看动作神态、三看主题。可以看到图画中的两个人肩并肩的站在一起，一个很悲伤、另一个很兴奋。主题是将酒和乐观精神连接，虽然出得比较“农业特色”，但是总体来讲凑合写吧。
剩下的就是用上课教给你们的那唯一的一个句子结构串接了。首先，用那个练习了N遍的第一句，把两个年轻人这个说法填上，As can be observed above, the cartoonist, in his creative and thought-provoking style, describes two youngsters, 然后用定语从句写who are standing shoulder to shoulder. 接着名词代词切换，写One of these young man, with his left hand upon his forehead, looks rather depressed, 在此处用whereas串接写一个人的行为，the other, with an exciting look on his face, is staring at the bottle on the ground. 这个时候别废话，直接点主题即可, Obviously, by providing the picture above, the cartoonist is conveying his attitude towards the optimistic spirit owned by many young people in our society.
描述的确不太难，都有的可写（只要你不放弃描述句，主动采用这种自杀式的写法）：毕竟在图中画了两个人，不像2011年在图画里面画一些西瓜皮这类的杂物，很虚幻的放在图画的最前端难为考生，却把能写的“两个人坐在船上扔垃圾”放在后面，更不像2010年弄个破火锅放那里，然后很穿越地把“莎翁、康德”等同志也放在火锅里，然后用“文化交流”当主题。2012年这次考试，即使考生只有高中的英文水平，用高中词汇也能攥一篇：
阐述段有点难，一下似乎抓不住文章的主旨，感觉像今年的四级写作，四级是把戒烟和意志力扯一块，考研是把酒和乐观扯一起（其实这两次的作文题都一样上不得台面，出得既不高雅、也不引人深思，不是烟、就是酒、十分粗俗。）但是如果考生不审题，那么今年的“死法”和去年的“死法”的确不一样，去年是这么死菜的：!@#%$&**，今年是这么死菜的？
2011年和2010年是图画复杂，阐述简单。2012年是描述简单、阐述不知所云，但是如果考生们仔细准备过主题词那就不同了，题目将立刻简化成如下这么个模式：
Clearly, in a situation full of pessimistic feelings, an optimistic spirit is not only necessary, but also indispensable. And many young people, just as the one described in the picture above, has realized its importance. 点评1：这里先定住主题和态度. 然后谈他们的表现With this attitude, they cultivate their confidence and abilities in their everyday life, no matter how disappointing the situation seems to be.点评2：接着谈这个行为的结果: As a result of this behavior, it is possible for them to improve their skills and fit into a competitive society, instead of indulging themselves in a world full of illusions and despair. 点评3：然后做条件假设，指出这样没有可能成功：If this situation continues, they are likely to walk out of their difficulty, thus obtain many opportunities or further their career.
上面这段儿，没用什么生词，基本就是成功励志的句型，基本切题，得到个满意的分数应该不成问题。（注意不是满分，自从2002年以来，看了孩儿们成千上万篇“习作”之后，我逐渐意识到，也许根本没有满分存在，因为孩儿们都是Chin…………glish）
当然如果您愿意玩“猛词”，也可以写成：
Undeniably, while people are in predicament, they invariably feel downcasted, and fancy that the world is doomed. However, in this threshold, these people should appeal to an optimistic spirit to rescue themselves out of their grave danger.点评1：用词大点，但是也得先定住主题和态度. 然后谈他们的表现Cherishing this perspective, they are supposed to boost their self-confidence, rather than indulge and then abandon themselves. 点评2：接着还是谈这个行为的结果: Accordingly, it is possible for them to enhance their abilities, thus adapting themselves to a highly competitive society. 点评3：然后还是做条件假设，指出这样可能成功：If this situation remains, these youngsters are likely to overcoming conditions and miseries, thus not only grasp many opportunities, but also carve the career of their own. To summarize, when pesssimism hits and a man is prone to collaspe, what he has to do is to rethink his strategy and approach any challenges, instead of weeping bitterly into his sleeves.
将两个文章进行对比，就会发现，只要主题明确，第二篇文章充其量也就是单词“大”了些，但是第一篇也有优点，其主题明确，词小点其实没什么，关键是要看得准、写的合理。
如下：
As can be observed above, the cartoonist, in his creative and thought-provoking style, describes two youngsters, who are standing shoulder to shoulder. One of these young man, with his left hand upon his forehead, looks rather depressed, whereas the other, with an exciting look on his face, is staring at the bottle on the ground. Obviously, by providing the picture above, the cartoonist is conveying his attitude towards the optimistic spirit owned by many young people in our society.
Clearly, in a situation full of pessimistic feelings, an optimistic spirit is not only necessary, but also indispensable. And many young people, just as the one described in the picture above, has realized its importance. With this attitude, they cultivate their confidence and abilities in their everyday life, no matter how disappointing the situation seems to be. As a result of this behavior, it is possible for them to improve their skills and fit into a competitive society, instead of indulging themselves in a world full of illusions and despair. If this situation continues, they are likely to walk out of their difficulty, thus obtain many opportunities or further their career.
第三段就无所谓了，别出错就行，无非是年轻人要学会培养能力、有了逆境要顶住压力、设定目标达到目标，少写一些“要增强意识、采取实际行动的话”还不如这么写：Many options are available to boost confidence and resist pessimism. For example, young people are supposed to cultivate their spirit of exploration. But the most important of all, they have to keep grace under pressure, especially while facing many difficulties. By doing so, they can set a goal and achieve it. After all, it is their dedication and participation that really matters. 比动不动就“增强意识、采取行动、只有这样才有美好未来”强一些。
题目是不难，估计今年的争议是在主题的判读上：如果仔细观察，又可以发现前面的那个人，满眼流露出贪婪和对酒精的渴望，整个儿一比后面的那个更没有出息。看那双眼睛，呈现出@#$%&*状，考研要考？但是定神一看，发现似乎是自己的“幻觉”，那就是考研还没有可能对酗酒这个问题发表看法吧？如果那样的话the addiction to alcohol也未必不是选择，就看怎么写了。如果友人是浸礼会成员（the Baptist Church)，或者是教友会成员（the Quakers），比较传统，而且烟酒不沾，或者是佛教徒或者伊斯兰教徒，这些人就都会说图画中的这两个人都沉溺欲望，无法自拔，是无可救药。他们都应该得多少分呢？仅仅因为他们的信仰、生活习惯等关系，没有想到喝酒也能和乐观套在一起？
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