给美国朋友Tom的回信
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:
1. 未及时回复的原因;
2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意: 1. 字数:120~150;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【试题点评】
今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到"书信题"的大框架中,考了一篇"以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段"的提纲作文,相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。
【经典套路】
第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段:"道歉"部分(相当于"写信背景")
第三段:"假期安排"部分
第四段:补充说明+客套话
【高分范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)
How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的汤姆,
How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)
你怎么样?(问候)你在的最后一封中问我我的暑假计划。(写信背景)我很抱歉,我没有立即回复。(写信目的)
How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
我多么希望我能阅读并回复你的邮件,当我收到它的时候。然而,我正忙着准备在那次考试,这对我来说很重要。结果,我只好完全专注于我的学习。我相信,如果你是我,你会做出同样的选择。(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)
顺便说一下,我的暑假很忙。(主题句)首先,我会做一份兼职的工作,这样我的人际交往能力会得到提高。(拓展句1)此外,我会做个短途旅行去北京新东方学校参加暑期课程。(拓展句2)最后但并非最不重要的,也许我会作为一个志愿者参加工作,在学校当助教。(拓展句3)
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)
这是我的暑假计划。你的是什么?我期待着你的早日答复。(以合理的客套话结尾)
美好的祝愿,
李华
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