Therefore， it is pretty clear that I disagree with the statement that only people who earn a lot of money are successful. As far as I am concerned， the value of success will be represented by many significant factors. Money is a little piece of rag of them， which can not be either overemphasized or ignored.
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2、why类型的题，如People attend college or university for many different reasons （for example， new experiences， career preparation， and increased knowledge）.Why do you think people attend college or university？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
许多朋友对这个问题不好拿捏，不知道结构怎么写。其实最简单的方法就是最有效的方法。以下是其步骤：
1、背景，点题，列举2－3个原因。列举原因的句子最好是一句话。
2、第一个原因。
3、第二个原因。
4、第三个原因。
5、结尾。总结前三个原因——用一句话说明。然后表面自己对此的看法和感受。
下面是一篇根据以上步骤写的文章，供参考。
People attend college or university for many different reasons （for example， new experiences， career preparation， and increased knowledge）.Why do you think people attend college or university？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of society， many people are inclined to go to university instead of finding job after high school. Among various motives that drive people to attend college or university are career preparation， increased academic knowledge and new pre-social experiences.
Career preparation may be the most common reason people attend college or university. Nowadays the phenomenon of the high education requirements from many companies is progressively outstanding. As is known to all， people may get the better job after graduation. Despite the difficulties of the admission from colleges or universities， people still want to cross into the door to go to university. As the culture of China， some students， who are lack of good condition of study， attempt to go to university learning more knowledge and gaining more opportunities since they know this way may be the only and best path which not only leads toward their brilliant future also changes their lives entirely.
Academic knowledge can be much easier accumulated regularly by learning in university. Of course， people can learn knowledge through other ways such as to learn on their own， to read and even observe. However， through the traditional media of colleges or universities， they are the easiest and fastest ways to obtain academic knowledge. This means the teachers in universities， either our instructors or mentors， are able to convey the knowledge， mentally or physically， much more efficient through the adequate methods than other ways such as self-study. Thus， people in college or university can avoid the mistakes that happened before， which can save their much more time to learn something else.
New academic experiences help people not only to obtain knowledge but only to understand the social relationship before contacting society. University， in fact， is an academic society which is smaller than our regular society. However， the complication of relationships between students and teachers， among classmates， boys and girls is almost the same as that of relationships of our big whole society. Clique may occur in university like the community or group in common society. Teens that have interests in common like spending their time in the cliques， most of which are related to music， sports， books， or painting. They are very popular in every university. In fact， students who stay in the cliques are consciously or subconsciously tend to learn how to get along with others before attending the regular society.
From the reasons I mentioned above， it is pretty clear why people attend college or university that are career preparation， increased academic knowledge and new pre-social experiences. As far as I am concerned， attending college or university is a prerequisite preparation before young are mature. People may accumulate essential skills in university to avoid some evitable troubles.
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