I am a village boy. I have lived in my village for 15 years. I have taken a bus, a car, but I have never taken a train. I only saw a train on TV. I know a train is very long and it can take a lot of people. When I saw it at the station , it seems that it is much longer than I think. And it is really fast. It took us only one hour to go to Beijing. We can also have lunch on the train , but it is a little expensive . We can also watch TV on it. How interesting to take a train! I want to take a train next time!

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作者以另外的一种顺序描述了自己乘车的经历，有些句子运用较好如: It seems that… 这一句型的运用就很好。还有 it took us …to …句型的运用都不错。如果再把以下错误修改掉就更好了。
1、 …that it is much longer than I think中的think 改为 thought，

2． We can also …but it is… 中的can 和 is 分别用过去时态。

3. How interesting to take a …中 interesting 后面加 it is