My father was born in the countryside , but we live in the city now .I am going to the countryside spend my May Day holidays this year. I like green plants, clear rivers and lovely animals there. I like breathing the fresh air on the mountain . I am going to go swimming in the river. I like not only the scene of the countryside, but also the people there. I will help them to do farm work. I will help the children in my hometown with their lessons. After that ,I will play with them . I believe that my May Day holidays will be very happy .

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评      语：I am going to the countryside spend my May Day holidays this year. 改为：I am going to the countryside to spend my May Day holidays this year.要用动词不定式to spend。能正确使用一般将来时叙述，不错！继续努力！