My dream is to be a teacher.I will try my best to study ,although my grades isn´ t good.
　　I am very interested in English,but I am nervous when the teacher asks me to answer the qustions.My composition always make mistakes on the grammer .I maked a big progess on my PE exam yesterday.So I believe that "Nothing in the world is impossible if you set your mind to do it."Now,I don´t be afraid of lost face.I hope can by this way to write the better compotions."Pratise makes perfect."I should recite some good senters.Whatever I face,I never give up.The rainbow always appear after the rainy.

批 改 老 师：杨老师
评      分：84分
级      别：优良
评      语：
本文写出了作者的心声，表现出作者积极的心态，是片很不错的习作。但作者对英语的应用还不够熟练，文中出现了用词错误和不当的问题，语法上个别地方也有问题，这些都需要作者多下功夫，多加联系运用以得到提高。

My dream is to be a teacher.I will try my best to study ,although my grades aren't（主语“grades”为复数） good.

I am very interested in English,but I am nervous when the teacher asks me to answer the qustions.I always make mistakes in grammer in my compositions.（"make mistakes“的主语只能是人，“在什么方面有问题”应用介词“in”）.I made great（"make“的过去是有误，"progress“是不可数名词） progess in （在考试中应用此介词）my PE exam yesterday.So I believe that "Nothing in the world is impossible if you make（“make one's mind to do sth,“固定搭配） your mind to do it."Now,I am not （此处不需助动词）afraid of losting（“of”是介词，后应跟动名词） face.I hope I （缺少主语）can write better compositions in this way（原句语序不正确，并且介词使用有误，比较级前通常不需定冠词）."Pratise makes perfect."I should recite some good sentences（拼写有误）.Whatever I face,I never give up.The rainbow always appears（主语是单数）after the rain.