Dear WangLin,

I'm glad to hear from you and I can see you are greatly annoyed at group learning.It's common for you to feel like this if you are not familiar with the topic or you are not well prepared for it .

In fact ,on the one hand ,by group learning ,you can learn to work with others, which will help with your future development .On the other hand ,you can learn from other people in the group .But meanwhile ,you will have to learn to stay in a noisy situation.

In my opinion ,you can prepare yourself for the coming new class ahead of time and get familiar with the topic to be dicussed.

Yours,

Lihua

1.It's common for you to feel like this if you are not familiar with the topic or you are not well prepared for it .

本句话中式英语的感觉比较明显，可以拆分成短句来表达可能会更好些,请作者参考。

If you are not familiar with the topic or you are not well prepared for it ,maybe you will not like it.

2.you can learn to work with others，learn在此处后面应该跟动名词，后面用working with,或者后面用cooperating with 会更好些。

3.which will help with your future development 本句改为which will helpful to your future development.

4.you can learn from other people in the group .learn后面应该有宾语，可以添加something,或者something useful等。汉语里面可以说向别人学习，但是英语表达时必须要有宾语。

5.But meanwhile ,you will have to learn to stay in a noisy situation. learn to 从语法结构上来说不算错，但是用learn+staying更好。

1.If you are not familiar with the topic or you are not well prepared for it ,maybe you will not like it.

2.you can learn cooperating with others,which will helpful to your future development.

本文属于书信题材的文章。对于一个高一的学生，刚刚学习英语写作，可以写出内容完整，表述清楚的文章是值得表扬的。本文在内容上有一些不足之处，在此指出，请作者在今后写作上多加注意。

1 .可以用短句表达的句子，就尽量用短句表达，一方面可以减少出错，另一方面短句的熟练运用也同样精彩。

2.尽量少的自己造句子，避免中国式的英语表达。建议作者可以多背诵一些优秀写作范文，流畅的教材内容，对于在写作时一些好的句子可以直接运用到写作中去。就像汉语写作一样，看的书多了，写起来自然就熟练了，英语同样如此。