小编有语：该题目为2003年9月英语四级作文范文，具体范文如下：

Directions:

1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病(或受伤)的情况

2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的

3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……

The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured)

关爱他人类范文：

During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003, one of my classmates, Li ming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital.

The news spread quickly on campus. At first, we were terrified and wondered if we were infected too. However, through our government's publicity on mass media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try out best to help her. Some teachers provided darly necessities while some students recorded the English class contents for him so that Li ming could not be left behind. With our care and concern, Li ming recovered quickly.

Such an incident teaches us a good moral. Our society is full of love, warm and peaceful, in which people-from man to woman, from individual to individual-lend others a hand. Just like a famous song goes, "the world will turn it to heaven only if everyone contributes a little." and I do believe that it's my great honor to live in this love-filled paradise!

相关佳句：

就“关爱他人”这个主题发表看法
1，现在社会上对这个主题有那些看法
2，你的看法是什么？请举例证明你的观点

Be caring of others is a kind of happiness, love is a blessing to others. Money is not omnipotent, care is needed is a common concern of society. Caring, concern and care is that it is everywhere around us. We all need love, care and ultimately, in life, others love us, that we should care to others.

另有关爱他人英语作文地址：http://www.liuxuepaper.com/yc/2488.html 其内容如下：

关爱他人“More care of others” 英语作文批改及点评：

注：作文地带已经将正确的放置到括号内，请大家参考：

In the past,there was aperson,he was Lei feng.He always helped other people to do some difficult things.

I think he was a hero(I think he is a hero).Nowadays,people don't help others.When an old lady falls over herself,nobody to help her(nobody wants to help her).Why do people do this?Because someone think the person helps the old lady because he or she makes the old lady fall(someone think the person who helps the old lady makes the old lady fall).Then,the old lady's relatives will ask the person who helps the old lady some money(Then,the old lady's relatives will ask the person who helps the old lady for some money).Sometimes,the old lady will tell them he or she is not making her fall.But always the old lady is being hurt ,she can't tell others something(she can't tell others anything).Nobody wants to be like that.But we need to be more care of people,otherwise when we have to do some difficult things,nobody will help us.

作文地带在上文批改到的地方：

第二行 I think he was a hero. 改为 I think he is a hero.
第三行 nobody to help her. 改为 nobody wants to help her.
第四行 someone think the person helps the old lady because he or she makes the old lady fall. 改为 someone think the person who helps the old lady makes the old lady fall.
第五行 Then,the old lady's relatives will ask the person who helps the old lady some money. 改为 Then,the old lady's relatives will ask the person who helps the old lady for some money.
第七行 she can't tell others something 改为 she can't tell others anything.